Flash Fiction: Aeolus
Aeolus
The god looked down from the silver city and smiled. He watched her plummet from the bridge, her arms reaching for churning water below. The cord connected to her ankle harness pulled taught and left her, bobbing and laughing, just a few feet above the waves. So beautiful and fearless. He’d known from the moment he saw her that she was the one for him.
“Watching that mortal, again?” asked his mother. She had never approved of his dalliances with the humans, but he cared little for her disapproval. What mattered ultimately was finding a suitable mate; after all, mortality was optional if you were a god.
“She’s magnificent, mother!” he said, turning to face her frowning face. “Oh, I know you disapprove of…”
“Thinning our golden blood?” she finished for him. “Yes…Yes, I do. Not that it matters much to you, after all. Much you care for the family honor.”
“Mother! How can you be such a bigot?” he retorted, losing patience. “Family honor…are you kidding me? What about Uncle?”
“You know it’s traditional to marry within the family, Aeolus. It’s the only way to insure proper bloodlines.”
“Inbreeding’s more like it,” he muttered.
“What was that, dear?” she asked in icy tones.
“Look, mother, I know there are differences, but it’s not like they can’t be overcome.”
“Whatever do you mean?” Her eyes opened wide in feigned surprise.
“Oh, don’t play dumb, mother. You know exactly what I mean! She could become immortal…”
“Immortal? Well, I’ve never…”
“What about cousin Psyche? She married Eros and became immortal. They’re still happily married, despite Aphrodite’s predictions.”
“Well, if you’re going to use just ANY blood as an example… I don’t care what the Olympians say! Goddess blood indeed… All that rising from the foam business, the strumpet!”
“Well, the point is that she IS goddess of love, and even she had the same reservations you do, but everything worked out. She has tons of grandkids, though she’d never admit it. And all it took was one little serving of Ambrosia.”
“Humph!” retorted his mother.
“I know that she’d be a wonderful goddess…”
She snorted.
“And addition to the family.”
She nearly choked. “Are you INSANE? I know we were talking about mortal-god marriages, but I didn’t seriously think you wanted to MARRY this girl!”
“I love her,” he said simply.
“I mean, having an affair, however ill advised is one thing, but you are a god after all…”
“I love her,” he said again.
“Well, that remains to be seen.”
“I do.”
“As much as that other girl you were interested in awhile ago? What was her name? Jenny…Josie…?”
“Jocelyne? No, that was just a fling.” His mother scoffed, but he continued. “No, really! We parted amicably.”
His mother regarded him a moment before remarking, “Well, at least you don’t turn them into trees or flowers or anything. Your cousin Apollo drives me batty with all that. I mean, seriously? A tree? The man falls for a mortal and she’d rather be a shrub then… oh, never mind.” Her shoulders slumped in resignation. “Go do whatever you want!”
From the balcony, he turned to gape at her.
“Are you serious?”
“That question seems to keep coming up, doesn’t it? Of course, I’m serious!”
“Well, you mean…you aren’t going to interfere?”
“No, darling. Of course not. You’re a grown god, and, frankly, I’ve gotten much too old to meddle in your affairs anymore.”
He grinned. “Oh come on, mother. You don’t look a day over two hundred!”
“You’re such a liar, but a sweet one.”
“Well, do you give me your word?”
“My word? Of course!”
“Not like that.”
“Oh…,” she sighed. “Ohhhh, alright. If you don’t trust your own mother.” She walked over to the small waterfall set into the wall. Dipping her hands beneath the running water, she closed her eyes. The air thickened, the lights dimmed, and thunder rolled dramatically as she said, “I swear by the River Styx that I will not prevent my son from marrying this mortal if she wishes to marry him.” Lightning flashed and the room suddenly brightened.
“Alright! Alright!” she said irritably. “No need to be so theatrical about it!” The light level in the room returned to that of a warm summer day. She grabbed a small handtowel from beside the basin and started drying her hands.
Aeolus looked relieved. “Thank you, mother,” he said. Then he did something completely out of character. He ran over and gave her a hug.
She was so surprised she nearly dropped the towel, but she returned the embrace warmly. “Anything for you, dear,” she said.
He grinned from ear to ear. “I’m going to see about getting to know her better,” he said. “I know where she works! I can get a job there and get to know her like any other mortal. Then once she’s fallen for me, we can break out the nuptial ambrosia!” He looked at his silver tunic in dismay. “I’d better go change. My lady awaits!”
His mother watched him go. She raised a hand in farewell. “Bye, dear. Go woo your mortal. You’re a god, after all! What’s not to love?”
He hurried to his room, pausing to to turn to the goddess once more. “By Olympus, I need to get some pants on! Everyone knows mortals these days wear pants!”
“Don’t worry, dear, I’ll keep my promise,” she said. His mother watched him hurry into his room and shut the door. “As long as the young lady wishes to marry you,” she added quietly to herself in the empty room.
Then she went to find her cousin, Discord.
THE END.
*I wrote this story as a prequel to my previous #fridayflash story, “Falling…”
October 2nd, 2009 at 7:03 am
wonderful. you have such a nice touch with dialogue. i can imagine these conversations vividly – nice work here.
October 2nd, 2009 at 7:24 am
The bungee jumping opening immediately caught my attention and I wondered what foul play the mother would introduce.Very entertaining.
October 2nd, 2009 at 11:58 am
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October 2nd, 2009 at 12:01 pm
Oh, mothers and their machinations!
Well done dialogue and really nice writing.
October 2nd, 2009 at 12:09 pm
Very nice! Love how you modernized the family bickering from the old greek stories, fun stuff!
October 2nd, 2009 at 12:27 pm
Meddling mother…humph! Your dialogue is great!
October 2nd, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Very good. Great imagery, dialogue and love the last line
Very clever.
October 2nd, 2009 at 4:40 pm
Oh this is brilliant! Fun story, and please throw me in the Styx if ever I meddle in my own children’s romances. Peace, Linda
October 3rd, 2009 at 1:40 am
Very fun dialogue, nicely done.
The gods – they’re only human after all!
i’ve been in a gods mood myself recently – something in the air?
October 3rd, 2009 at 6:44 am
Good thing he has the godly realm to return to. That thing of pulling on pants and going to a job wears mighty thin after a short while.
October 5th, 2009 at 4:50 pm
A story about a god in love ! Wonderful. Witty dialog, also. Enjoyed this lots
October 6th, 2009 at 5:28 am
Wonderful. I loved it. Many many lines that are just precious. Knew something was up when she made the oath and said, “if she wishes to marry him.” Clever, wicked mom.
~jon
October 6th, 2009 at 4:25 pm
Oh I knew there was going to be a catch. There always is, isn’t there with Gods. But I really liked the invocation of Discord. Very nicely done.
The back and forth between the Mother and Son is excellent. You show a good ear for dialogue.
Most enjoyable.
October 7th, 2009 at 1:28 pm
Thanks! I appreciate everyone’s kind comments.
October 8th, 2009 at 11:43 am
Hee! I liked it! I did wonder if “if she wishes” was going to be a catch…
October 8th, 2009 at 2:13 pm
Very nice. This was a good read.
October 8th, 2009 at 5:59 pm
Very entertaining! Such a nice feel for the dialogue and it sucked me right in, right away! Thanks, G! Nice Work! -K
October 9th, 2009 at 1:09 pm
Thank you everyone for your kind words. They really made my day!