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Mar 21

Minimeder Monday: Run

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Minimeder Monday, Writing Corner

by ganymeder

Minimeder Monday: Run

My son, Minimeder, wrote this Sunday evening. He was inspired by the events of a few hours previous. Enjoy!

Run

He dived for cover behind a storage box. “This may not be as easy as I thought,” he muttered. He dashed through a group of people who were eying the sights that were set out before them. He found his target and went to it as quickly as possible.

He opened the metal lid and beheld the sight before him. “Wow,” he thought. He grabbed the green that was inside the box and made a run for it.

He sat down in a seat and showed the men in black what he had done. “You’ve done well,” one of them said, setting down a fork beside him. “Now, lets eat.”

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  1. Marisa Birns

    March 22, 2010 at 6:16 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    Very well written…excellent first paragraph gets the story going with action!

    And a mystery. Wonder what is the ‘green’ that he grabbed. :)

  2. Eric J. Krause

    March 22, 2010 at 6:27 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    Plenty of action and mystery to make this a good story. Well done!

  3. ganymeder

    March 22, 2010 at 7:52 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    I guess I should have put it in the notes at the end, but I thought he did a good job of showing. It’s an all you can eat buffet. :)

  4. mazzz_in_Leeds

    March 22, 2010 at 8:43 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    Suspense, adventure and a twist – well done!

    I suspect the author was just as talented as the main character in getting the good stuff at the place that inspired this story :-)

  5. Pj Kaiser

    March 22, 2010 at 8:51 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    I love it – lots of quick action – a fun read!

  6. Jen B

    March 22, 2010 at 9:10 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    Great action-packed story with mystery. I didn’t know what the green was, either, but that could have easily been fixed. Well done!

  7. Beccane

    March 22, 2010 at 9:59 am (UTC -4) Link to this comment

    Good stuff! I like the uncertainty of what exactly the “green” is. All in all, a very nice piece of flash fiction!

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